Within many family structures women are bossier than men? (2013, Malta EC)

Within many family structures women are bossier than men?

 

I can’t answer that title directly because in my own case the situation changed spontaneously. When I was young, in my memory, my father’s words were always like a law. In every meal time, in the decision of the important things and even every detail about vacation, he had dominated all the family members. But now my mother is beyond the law. I’m not sure about the exact time, but from some day she usually has voiced her opinion about education, company and wedding ceremony of her kids, my brothers and I.

 

It’s not only the state of my house. I think it is quite a common fact these days. Why can it change in this way? In my opinion, firstly, women mostly have an economic power in their house, whether they’re married or not. And then, after the childbirth, their protective instinct is strengthened more than ever. In addition, as they grow older, it is said that male hormone will be increasing in them. So they can control their family as strongly as possible.

 

I think that people who can insist strongly in their group are the only people who have known the group very well and have done their best for it. They have an absolute right to speak out. So can they be the boss of the family?

 

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